Obama Praises Parkville Middle School Students During Visit
President Obama arrived at Parkville Middle School at 10:10 a.m. and was greeted by about 100 people who had lined Hiss Avenue. Full Story »
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Posted by Mary Hartney - Feb 14, 2011 - 11:48 AM PST
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Mary Hartney - Feb 14, 2011 - 11:49 AM PST
While this story stared off strong it seemed to quickly lose relevant information. After the third paragraph the article turned into more of a step by step description of Obama's visit. Additionally, the topic of protestors was not developed enough and seemed out of place due to the lack of information. The link to photos of protestors also seemed out of place and could have been incorporated better.
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