A Decisive Victory Over McCain

Barack Hussein Obama was elected the 44th president of the United States on Tuesday, sweeping away the last racial barrier in American politics with ease as the country chose him as its first black chief executive.

Mr. Obama’s election amounted to a national catharsis — a repudiation of a historically unpopular Republican president and his economic and foreign policies, and an embrace of Mr. Obama’s call for a change in the direction and the ... Full Story »

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Michael Bugeja
3.3
by Michael Bugeja - Nov. 5, 2008

This is the type of reporting you get when the journalist is a bystander to a computer rather than to people and their history. This awkwardly written but nevertheless thorough New York Times article should have captured the jubilation many felt about Obama rather than the bitterness some felt about Bush (whose "repudiation" occurs in the second sentence) when the opponent was John McCain, mentioned later in the report. Tomorrow's children will think Obama defeated Bush. The New York Times reporter, seemingly aware that he is writing for history, as this is our newspaper of record, could have focused on the racial unity symbolized by Obama rather than the partisan politics that few will remember when we reflect on this moment. Also, I have nothing against the use of Obama's middle name, but note that the Times is the only national outlet this morning to have emphasized that in the lead. This otherwise comprehensive overview of the election of the person who will become our first African-American president comes with a racial theme that ordinarily would be out of place, save on this historic occasion. But if race is important, then the reporter should not have omitted the eloquent references to that in McCain's concession speech, which also will go down as just as historic. Beyond race, as of this morning, this was one of the most quoted sentences from McCain's speech: "I wish Godspeed to the man who was my former opponent and will be my president." That never made it into this factual but editorialized report, and were it written in the true Obama spirit, it would have been more jubilant and objective.

The lead is what we remember and what historians quote. This NTY lead is both brief and redundant, mentioning twice that Obama was elected president and adding "with ease" to "sweeping away.” Compare that to this: "Obliterating the last racial barrier in national politics, Barack Obama defeated war hero John McCain Tuesday and will become the 44th and first black president of the United States of America."

Mr. McCain offered a gracious concession speech at the Biltmore Hotel in Phoenix shortly after 11:15 p.m. Eastern time, quieting his booing supporters more than once when he mentioned Mr. Obama’s name.

Stop editorializing and start focusing on McCain’s historic concession speech, especially if you’re going to emphasize race. Omitting passages like this is glaring editorializing, inserting the reporter’s opinion by omission. This would have enhanced the article’s racial theme if McCain’s speech was quoted conscientiously: “A century ago President Theodore Roosevelt’s invitation of Booker T. Washington to dine at the White House was taken as an outrage in many quarters. America today is a world away from the cruel and frightful bigotry of that time. There is no better evidence of this than the election of an African-American to the presidency of the United States.”

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