I like the way the story opened up and gave readers the news straight from the beginning. I also really like how the article critiques media misinterpretation on the data discovered.
Noelle Morano
Member (since April 2009)I am a student at Santa Clara University in California and joined this site as part of a journalism class at school. I hope to learn about what makes a good story so that I can apply that knowledge to my own writing!
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HIV co-discovers Gallo and Montagnier unite to push for renewed focus on HIV/AIDS: Scientific American Blog
I think its interesting that the author chose to write an article reminding the public of an epidemic that has been ignored in recent times.
The combination of science and personal experience help give readers concrete and application information on the subject. I am not sure how much I trust the publication format, but Pavlina certainly seems to be a knowledgeable expert on the subject.
The story takes an interesting look at the benefits of partnering with nonprofits due to the financial crisis. While the article touches on the impact cuts in city funding would have on affected populations, focusing more attention on this issue would be interesting to readers.
The article provides interesting perspectives on why swine flu matters. The addition of excerpts from the interview with Chris Olsen also provides critical insight into developments on the issue. I also think that its useful and important that the author of the article highlights that this is not a time to panic.
The story is extremely relevant and shows the staggering connection between the financial crisis and the increasing homeless population.
It was interesting to read a story about journalism and news coverage. I liked how the author went in depth about how the media can influence people's opinions and emotions on an issue.
It is interesting to see the impact media and technology can have on the spread of information, especially in this day and age with increased public access to information on the internet. I hope that readers see the responsibility to be credible that comes along with online blogging and posts.
The author does a good job at both presenting the facts of the article as well as drawing readers in with the personal stories of soldiers. The story is quite relevant today because of the staggering number of soldiers returning from the current war in the Middle East with diagnosed disorders.
The author takes on the often publicly sensitive subject of legalized marijuana. The article effectively sites new strides being made in the publics opinion of the drug, but could probably provide more insight from opposition groups.
The article does a good job at presenting the material in a concise and informative manner. The multimedia interactive option featuring opinions of those affected by A.D.H.D. adds a meaningful perspective to the issue. The author's choice to add advice for medication plans and steps to take to help relieve the problem towards the end of the article s also effective.
The blog comment is effective in that it informs readers of the findings in another study in an unbiased manner. The author gives a relevant context for the story, relating its meaningfulness back to the big picture of preventing unwanted teen pregnancy and STDs. The comment offers credible source links back to original articles as well, allowing readers to understand the background of the stories and findings.
This is an example of good journalism because it presents an issue that new research has shed light on with factual references and findings. It also points out what it does not know, allowing the reader to independently research more if interested. Finally, the story does a good job of emphasizing a larger issue at hand involving controversy over both the passing of Prop 8 as well as Obama's choice of pro-Prop 8 Rev. Warren to preside over his inauguration.
I believe that this story represents a unique type of journalism, allowing people infected with HIV/AIDS to speak about their experiences for themselves.The authors did a good job of presenting diverse stories and pulling the audience in with audio, visual photos, and text. The story takes a personalized inside look at how people today living with AIDS are still dealing with the associated stigma surrounding the virus.







