The use of quotes is very effective. There are numerous quotes that demonstrate that this story was well researched and add credibility.
This does seem like quality journalism, as it is an opinion piece but it is very well written and draws the audience in. It is clear, well-organized, and flows very well, and there are no visible errors or problems. It is insightful in its broader associations to Brooke Shields and current issues among teenagers and racy behavior today. My only comment is an opinion: Miley Cyrus is just a 15 year old girl, and I believe there is a little too much pressure placed on her. 15 year olds make mistakes sometimes, and its even harder when every single thing that they do is overanalyzed. I think the public should give Miley (and Selena, Demi, Taylor, and the JoBros) a break, before they turn into the next Lindsays and Parises.





This does seem like quality journalism, as it is an opinion piece but it is very well written and draws the audience in. It is clear, well-organized, and flows very well, and there are no visible errors or problems. It is insightful in its broader associations to Brooke Shields and current issues among teenagers and racy behavior today. My only comment is an opinion: Miley Cyrus is just a 15 year old girl, and I believe there is a little too much pressure placed on her. 15 year ... More »